Week 3 · Saturday
Convert the audience's upsell fear into email opt-ins by demonstrating — not describing — the exact reasoning a licensed electrician uses to recommend a rewire vs a targeted repair
Posting window: Saturday 7:00 PM PT
Posting times shown in Pacific Time (PT) — adjust to your audience's timezone in your scheduler.
Hook options
Pick the one you'll use — the script opener updates to match
A customer asked me if I was upselling her. Fair question.
How do you know your electrician isn't upselling you?
Most of the rewires I get called out to quote — I don't recommend.
Three things in this panel tell me whether it's a repair or a rewire.
Before I recommend a rewire, this is what I have to see first.
Script
Opener (0:00 – 0:10)
A customer asked me last week if the rewire I recommended was something she actually needed or something I was upselling. That is a fair question. Here is the exact reasoning I walked her through, standing at a panel that looks a lot like hers.
Body
I do not recommend a rewire based on age. A 1955 house with cloth-insulated wire that is intact, in conduit, and not brittle can be safer than a 1998 house somebody hacked up. What I am looking for is three things. One — is the insulation on the conductors cracking or crumbling when I move it. Two — are the grounds present and actually bonded, or are we running two-prong ungrounded circuits feeding modern loads. Three — how much of the original wiring has already been spliced, extended, or buried inside walls without junction boxes. If one of those is bad, that is usually a repair. If two or three are bad across most of the house, patching it costs more over five years than doing it right once.
Close / CTA
I put the whole framework — the three checks, what each one costs to fix in isolation, and when a repair actually beats a rewire — in a one-page write-up I send out to my email list. Link is in the bio. If you own a pre-1980 house in Charlotte, read it before you get a quote from anybody. Including me.
Production paths
- 1.Pick a job where the panel is open and shows at least one of the three conditions in the script — ideally an older Dilworth or Plaza Midwood house before you start work
- 2.Set phone vertical (9:16) on a small tripod or lean against a toolbox at chest height, about 3-4 feet from the panel so the panel is clearly visible in the frame beside your torso
- 3.Check lighting — panel interiors are dark. Point a work light at the ceiling for bounce, not directly into the panel or your face
- 4.Record the full 80-second script in one take with the panel visible over your shoulder. Do not read from a script — glance at bullet points on your phone between takes
- 5.Shoot 3-4 takes back to back. Between takes, get 15 seconds of B-roll: close-up of a cracked conductor, a two-prong outlet, a bad splice — whatever the panel actually shows
- 6.Import the best take into CapCut. Trim dead air at the start and end. Total finished length: 75-85 seconds
- 7.At the three-point section, cut in your B-roll shots — one per point. Keep audio continuous underneath
- 8.Add auto-captions in CapCut. Manually fix any electrical terms it mishears (Federal Pacific, Pushmatic, knob-and-tube, bonded)
- 9.Caption style: white text, bottom third, no fancy animation. This audience trusts plain
- 10.Export at 1080p vertical, save to camera roll
Platform captions
Got asked on a service call last week whether the rewire I recommended was real or an upsell. Fair question. Here is the exact reasoning — three things I look for in the panel before I put that recommendation in writing. Full framework in the newsletter, link in bio.
Hashtags
The three checks I run before I recommend a rewire vs a targeted repair. Charlotte pre-1980 houses only.
Hashtags
Thumbnail prompt
Paste this into an AI image generator (Midjourney, Ideogram, or ChatGPT) to create your thumbnail.
9:16 vertical thumbnail. Real photo, no illustration. Foreground: a licensed electrician in a work shirt standing beside an open residential electrical panel in an older home, panel interior visible with breakers and wiring exposed. Natural work-light bounce lighting, slightly warm. Bold sans-serif text overlay in the upper third reading 'IS THIS A REAL RECOMMENDATION — OR AN UPSELL?' in white with a thin black stroke. No emojis, no arrows, no red circles. Understated, credible, not clickbait.
Scheduling
Tool: Metricool
- 1.Log into Metricool, click Planning in the left sidebar
- 2.Click the + on Saturday at 7:00 PM PT (adjust for your account timezone — 10:00 PM ET)
- 3.Select Instagram Reels and TikTok as the platforms in the same post
- 4.Upload the exported 9:16 video
- 5.Paste the Instagram Reels caption into the Instagram field
- 6.Toggle to the TikTok tab in the same composer and paste the TikTok caption — do not let Metricool auto-copy the IG caption over
- 7.For Instagram: set cover frame to a moment where the panel is clearly visible in-frame beside you
- 8.For TikTok: leave cover as auto or pick a clean frame — TikTok covers matter less than the first 1.5 seconds of video
- 9.Confirm 'Share to Feed' is on for Reels
- 10.Save and schedule. Verify it appears on the calendar at the correct time
- 11.Set a phone reminder for 15 minutes after post time to check both platforms published cleanly and to reply to first-hour comments
Lead capture
Where this should drive
A one-page write-up titled 'The Three-Check Framework: Repair vs Rewire in a Pre-1980 Charlotte Home' delivered as the welcome email of the Proper Wire newsletter list. Linktree button on the profile routes to a Mailchimp signup page. Once someone subscribes, Mailchimp auto-sends the PDF, then drops them into a monthly list that gets one field-note email per month. The point is not to sell to the list — it is to be the electrician they already trust when the panel finally forces a call.
Landing page copy
Repair or rewire? Here is how a licensed electrician actually decides.
The three checks I run inside the panel before I put any recommendation in writing — plus what each fix costs in isolation, and when a targeted repair honestly beats a full rewire. Written for pre-1980 Charlotte homes.
- •The three conditions in the panel that separate a real rewire recommendation from an upsell
- •What each one costs to fix on its own — and the five-year math on patching vs replacing
- •One field note per month from real Charlotte jobs. No sales pitch, no spam, unsubscribe anytime.
Set up with Mailchimp + Linktree
- 1.In Mailchimp, create a new Audience or use your existing one. Add a signup form: Audience > Signup Forms > Landing Pages > Create
- 2.Use the landing_page_copy above for headline, subhead, bullets, and button text
- 3.Under form fields, keep it to just email — do not ask for name, phone, or address. Every extra field cuts conversion
- 4.Create the framework as a one-page PDF (Google Doc > Download as PDF is fine — do not overbuild this). Upload it to Mailchimp's Content Studio
- 5.Set up a Customer Journey: Audience > Customer Journeys > Create > Starting point: 'Signup form submitted'. Add step: 'Send email' — subject line 'The three-check framework, as promised'. Body: short 4-5 sentence email, attach the PDF, sign with your name
- 6.Publish the landing page and copy the Mailchimp URL
- 7.In Linktree, add a new button. Title: 'Repair or rewire? The framework I use.' Paste the Mailchimp URL. Drag this button to the top position
- 8.In the Instagram and TikTok bios, confirm the Linktree URL is present. On TikTok, you need 1,000 followers for a clickable bio link — you have 9,800, so this is live
- 9.Test the full flow yourself: click bio link > click Linktree button > land on Mailchimp page > sign up with a test email > confirm the PDF arrives
- 10.For the first 30 days, check the Audience dashboard weekly. If signups are coming in but the PDF is not being opened, rewrite the welcome email subject line.
